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Spike's pain and anger come through beautifully. The story is like one long anguished scream.
Sdani posted on
Jan 28, 2004
Well written, a pleasure to read. And Ditto what A R Evett said!
A. R. Evett posted on
Jan 21, 2004
God. Sad and sweet and beautiful. Full of passion and anger. Just excellent in every way. It's writing like this that I strive for every time I work on a story. It's all over the place, and yet it just flows beautifully. Spike, here, is the rowdy punk, the lost boy, and the proud man all at once. And it's fucking awesome.
I particularly loved the description of the Spike/Dawn relationship. The complexity of his struggle when dealing with his inner demon and still attempting to remain faithful to his promise. Very well done.