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Well, this was just stunningly beautiful. Your technique was poetic and raw at the same time, and the despair from both the characters was authentic and they were easy to empathize with. The story worked. Very well done.
chez posted on
Apr 24, 2007
kind of weird but just proving thatspike is just a bloke like all the other blokes.