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Correction: In the comment below, I *meant* to say that I'd have enjoyed this present tale *more.* It certainly is enjoyable in a despairing sort of way. It was just that I found the lack of identification of who Spike had in his change a bit distracting.
I enjoy and respect your writing enormously. However, I think I would have enjoyed this brief present tale had I been able to determine for sure whether it was Buffy or Dawn with Spike in it. I didn't seem able to find conclusive evidence the one way or the other. Perhaps it's immaterial for the story's purposes, but wondering about it distracted me from the mood of the tale.