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You know how to write a wonderful story: suspense, tension, high-eroticism, nothing vile but everything right, every image evoking what I think you want to convey. One note though: the last line Giles says to Spike, it doesn't sound convincing although it's true, Giles wants Spike to want him. Somehow it sounds too easy for Giles to say at that moment. Or maybe that's just my interpretation. However, it's just a note, don't forget, You Write Beautifully & You're Great!!!!