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That was hot. But still sweet. I think that you made Spike a little to soft, but off course he could just have been nice so that he would get the blood. Sometimes I got confused, when the posistions changed without being described. But in the next lines I mostly could figure it out. Not that a little touch of enigma isn't nice.
Great work. I'll be checking out your other stuff.