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4  Marilyn posted on Dec 29, 2003
Very nice Spike and Fred...I always thought they would make a good couple and this was really sweet!
Btw, this is my second attempt, so may see message twice...sorry! :)
3  BuffyX posted on Dec 22, 2003 | http://www.livejournal.com/users/buffyx
Aww! This was just adorable. Loved it!
2  hesadevil posted on Dec 22, 2003
Nice to see you writing Spike again. You really can paint images with words. I could just see the expression on his face when "Spike's eyes narrowed and he looked across the room."
You also have the voices captured in the rhythm of their speech. I could hear the slight giggle in Fred's voice, and the sexy rumbling in Spike's.

More please, and soon.
1  hesadevil posted on Dec 22, 2003
Nice to see you writing Spike again. You really can paint images with words. I could just see the expression on his face when "Spike's eyes narrowed and he looked across the room."
You also have the voices captured in the rhythm of their speech. I could hear the slight giggle in Fred's voice, and the sexy rumbling in Spike's.

More please, and soon.

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