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Wow! That was even better than your other story. Really chilling. It's just right. The difference a day makes is monumental. You can still totally see parts of poor William in the psycho killer. And Cecily is spot on. I still don't like her but I feel really bad for her and she's definitely got stones. Great job! You really should write more.