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OH! SO GOOD!!! I wish it was longer and I was hoping for a sweet love scene but Spike is a man of principles... honorable but so sad for those of us who love this pairing. But hey, you can write a sequel based on the first time! :)
Beautiful. Poignant. "he relented as the tears ran down his cheeks and bathed them both in sin and devotion" That line is a piece of art. A wonderful way to end a wonderful story. I don't know how else to praise you than saying that this is great, I'm to touched right now to find adequat words.
Just this Girl posted on
Nov 5, 2005
WOW i really enjoyed that, it kept me intersted until the very end. it was written wondefully. i just loved it from start to it's incrediable finish the words were put beautifully between the two characters. Very good job