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These are just such wonderful lines - they describe so perfectly the relationship that might have been. Buffy's denial of Spike, even if her Hero's Journey demanded it, always leaves me with such a sense of loss for the un-fulfilled potential that their ultimate union. Your story really brings out that sense of loss.
Nice. Gorgeous use of language, desperate and sad.
bridget posted on
Oct 7, 2003
Why do I read post-Chosen fic before heading to work? Shouldn't I know better by now? You've made me cry with your delicately chosen words and sharp delicious pain. Thank you. (And please, please let her find an amulet in the rubble with her Spike in it. She needs him.)