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Neat idea. I had always assumed Spike was unusual in part because William was so sensitive and passionate before he was turned. Reading your story makes me consider other possibilities, and also makes me want to read more about "poor Spilossch" both before and after being integrated with William :-)
Please do consider writing more stories in general