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I think you did the sci-fi very well! I really liked finding out what had happened at the end. Finding out he'd been there for Dawn until she died which was heartbreaking and then the earth being gone, etc.
Intruiging premise - I would be interested in reading more, actually. Well written and a good read.
Caille posted on
Sep 15, 2003
What a great glimpse into a plausible post-post Buffyverse! This was intriguing.
I think I'd prefer that we didn't actually get the ensign's direct POV - maybe Spike could simply read her thoughts from her expression and body language. But that's a minor detail. Thanks for an interesting bit of fic!