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Well, I was just sitting about and wondering to myself, I wonder if any of those old Spike fansites survived, and in my search, I discovered this story.
It is so beautifully written, it took my breath away. Your descriptions are flawless and you conveyed the emotions so well. I am a great fan of your more complex analogies. I simply had to stop to rave about the excellence in this piece of writing. Good on you, for this surpasses my expectations for any fanfiction and makes me think- a great accomplishment from a great writer.
Jesus! At first I wasn't so sure of your writing in Angel POV, but by the end I was just awe-struck by your brilliant word use. The last three paragraphs in particular paint such a beautiful mental image... Sheer poetry of emotion... Well done my friend. I Think this is one of the best portrails of their bare and true emotions... Sometimes the brutal truth is often the most fulfilling.... Keep up the grat work..
I'm mad on these Angel POVs -- they're lyrical and dense and deleriously pretty. You've succeeded in making me understand the mopey chap! Even more, you've make me *like* him -- and seeing Spike through his eyes is delicious. Wonderful.