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Brilliant story, Anyas characterisation was brilliant, especially loved the pinching of Jonathan to see if he was the fist Evil, and her bumping into Spike. Loved it.
ceec posted on
May 23, 2003
What a great punchline! And wait until they tell Anya the "bad" news. Heh. She'll have that particular region of hell running like clockwork.
You have to write a sequel! What happened in that other room?! Besides, we need to know how poor Mr. Gordo died. Was it a noble death? Was he a brave little piggy right to the bitter end? Farewell Gordo...
I loved the idea if Jonathan as a guiding spirit,working on his own salvation. This story made me laugh and smile and sniffle. Lydia Chalmers, acting as Spike's guide!! She'd enjoy that! Anya's "sex with a champion" remark is so in character. And - sniff - whatever happened to Mr Gordo? He has been sorely missed. I will never forgive JW if he is dead, too.
Thank you for this.
Estepheia posted on
May 23, 2003
I know this is funny and I smile and I even laughed out loud, but god, it's really quite sad. I miss Anya already (and Spike, of course).