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I loved this story. Simple things you wrote. One line that would just make the whole story shine. It definitely grabbed my attention.
ceec posted on
May 22, 2003
Wonderful texture to your Spike! The flaws make him more believable than many of the stories that try to re-cast him as the perfect boyfriend. The fact that Spike and this woman care strongly for each other really shines through; that the woman turned out to be Dawn was a complete surprise.