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Incredibly well written. I especially loved the little details (looks up from the hood... sees elivs wobbly head, car seat). Other parts were perhaps a little hard to believe (denting the car hood so extensively, some of the injuries were too extensive to believe the continuation of the scenario as it did implausible. The ending was perfect, but I'd like to have Spike toss Angel something a little more intriguing than the wobbly head.
sasha posted on
Jun 24, 2003
so. no one wants to comment on this fic. well it was great, especially the reference to spike and angel's past.