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Like others have said - I wish "Beneath You" had ended this way. It was nice to read.
mazza posted on
Sep 18, 2003
just found your story today and I actually have a tear in my eye finishing it! Yes, you got it right this is what should have happened. Lovely story - well written with the right intonation and wording.