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3  Sarah posted on Jan 20, 2003
2  Nora posted on Dec 10, 2002
Very hot...not so vanilla at all. My only bit of constructive criticism might be to take more time with it. You start to draw out all the sensuous details but then suddenly rush to the ending. More detail would make this already very good story evn more tantalizing...

Also, what was the deal with the belt? You mentioned it, Spike reaching for it, and a bunch of possibilities came to mind of what he would do with it, but then he didn't seem to do anything other than undo it. Which makes sense, but somehow the rest of it, the dialogue, suggested something else.

Good job though. Write more!
1  msm posted on Dec 1, 2002
One word: Hot!
Loved it.

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